JuneSSantos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Ball Z: Frieza Without Legs]

this is so badass i love this

[2 Worms, 1 Bomb (Worms Reloaded Parody)]

Oh my god, I love Worms so much
They make my belly so warm and achy I love worms I have a little tapeworm inside me god this is awesome

ChrisnOut responds:

Bro same I love putting them in my cookies and giving them to grandpapa yum yum 😋

[Chip of Potato]

man, i thought it was funny at first, but seeing the little the little guy getting abused because of his religion is kinda fucked, like, do you really think its funny to portrait jehovah witnesses as aliens and make them go through this sort of abuse and suffering? you should legitimately rethink about how you want to go forward in life man, i pray for your improvement

but there's funny reptile dinosaur man i like it
5 star

Tiltro responds:

You gonna make me bonkers one day so watch you're tone young man or else it's time out for you.

[Driving]

i was about to give it 0 stars since the joke wasn't "women can't drive" but then i saw deer woman get hit by a can in the ending so it automatically changes everything

5

[Mix 'n' Match: Episode 1 - New Day, New Ideas]

I love when the little funny rat does the funny

And the black rat is kind of a badass XD

[a Slice of Anxiety: Raining Late.]

There's legitimately so much charm in the style you decided to go with

I legitimately really like how everything moves and the amount of expression the character have, and how some of these scenes are shot, like in the rain scene where you just cut to a water hose showering on the drawing is legitimately pretty good

My only real criticisms is that I feel like certain scenes could be a little faster, and I feel like it ended too soon?
I legitimately thought that there was going to be more after she starts catching on fire, but then it just ended and I felt like it was a setup for something that never happened, if that makes any sense

Still, I think this is pretty great, and you got something really strong going on right here
I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the future.

Quinndox responds:

Thank you much. I'm glad you like it.

In regards to the pacing and underwhelming conclusion, you're feelings are completely understandable and correct.

I had originally planned for the video to be much longer -- about double the length.
The main character (Lemon Cake) would've made it to school on time, but as a result of her soggy situation, she'd begin to feel flustered at the thought of standing out -- further adding payoff to the downpour as well as developing the theme of anxiety.

Unfortunately, I got a bit overly ambitious for my first cartoon and, mainly due to time constraints, had to reduce what I'd produce.

However, for any future Slice's of Anxiety, I'll likely actually continue to make them short in length as I feel the duration better fits what I'm going for.
And because of this, I'll make sure to keep in mind the shorter nature of them during the writing process, hopefully resulting in a much more solid pace / narrative.

Thank you for the feedback, it's much appreciated. 👍

have a bloomin' day.